https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Le-FeL2F-EA
This is my documentary on why there are less Asian footballers in the premier league. It is a 3 minute video where i tried my best to get the best range of different opinions i could get.
Auidence feedback:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PkirKDHUI5M
I asked if the documentary was good.
One of my response's was that "the video was informative and learnt something new in a space of few minutes". From this we see that the video shed light on the issue as intended.
My next response was about how I used archive footage of young mainly asian footballers playing in the video.
Another positive response praised how the interviews took place. The voice over was praised as well and it was better than the previous voice over used for the practice documentary that was made.
Someone gave feedback on one of the locations i filmed on. They mentioned how the gym feeling gave the video a more authentic look to it.
For criticism someone mentioned lighting for one of the places where i filmed this was near the park when i had only a few minutes to film before evening.
Another feedback of criticism was not having a bar explaining briefly the name of the person who i was interviewing. However i changed this and decided that I would add their name and their former and present profession in football when they played or are playing as.
I was asked also to lower the background music slightly to make it more clearer when filming. When editing i changed this in my final video so it would be more clear.
After receiving the feedback i decided that i would improve my video and the top video is my final copy that i made.
This is my documentary on why there are less Asian footballers in the premier league. It is a 3 minute video where i tried my best to get the best range of different opinions i could get.
Auidence feedback:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PkirKDHUI5M
I asked if the documentary was good.
One of my response's was that "the video was informative and learnt something new in a space of few minutes". From this we see that the video shed light on the issue as intended.
My next response was about how I used archive footage of young mainly asian footballers playing in the video.
Another positive response praised how the interviews took place. The voice over was praised as well and it was better than the previous voice over used for the practice documentary that was made.
Someone gave feedback on one of the locations i filmed on. They mentioned how the gym feeling gave the video a more authentic look to it.
For criticism someone mentioned lighting for one of the places where i filmed this was near the park when i had only a few minutes to film before evening.
Another feedback of criticism was not having a bar explaining briefly the name of the person who i was interviewing. However i changed this and decided that I would add their name and their former and present profession in football when they played or are playing as.
I was asked also to lower the background music slightly to make it more clearer when filming. When editing i changed this in my final video so it would be more clear.
After receiving the feedback i decided that i would improve my video and the top video is my final copy that i made.
Please can you make this all much clearer as to it being your finished film, as just calling it 'documentary' and then only copying in the link doesn't give us any information about what the link is for. Also, write up the questions you asked the group for feedback as part of this post.
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