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Practice Documentary -- 'Documentary in a Day'


Link bellow:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJods7C6ybo

Feedback:

After my video was seen by class my fellow classmates gave me their feedback on what they thought of my documentary. One of the common criticism was that the voice over was not very good and the speed was to slow and was not a welcoming voice They also talked about how the music and how it made the mood more sad. They complained saying it made the video looked as if it was a charity advert because of the background music. Another problem with my video was that a lot was not shown and more could of been explained. When listing to the feedback at lot of what people were repeating was that the video informed people and it showed what the ISOC was and what i was like. I was praised for having archive pictures used for explaining some of the things the group does. A lot of things that i was told that i should improve was having more scenes and having a better voice over.








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  1. media16 April 2017 at 11:59

    Add a short reflection of what you thought went well and what you wanted to improve on for this test-run.

    Jo

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